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THE DRIVEWAY

A man who cannot walk into his own house. Three ten second takes, with a shot list and a line of dialogue.

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Three-scene drama 0:30 16:9 150.000 points

What it was made with

Film engine Kling O3 Pro
Shots 3 takes, 10s each
First take Text to video
Takes 2 and 3 From a held frame
Ratio 16:9
Sound One whispered line, no music

This is the only film here written like a call sheet. The prompt opens with a character block in square brackets, then four numbered shots with their own timing, lens and camera move, then the lighting and the audio. Ten seconds is long enough for an engine to invent something, so every second is spoken for. The second and third takes start from a frame of the previous one and open with "preserve", which is what keeps the same man in the same shirt.

Shot by shot

1

Take one, the car in the rain

Kling O3 Pro, text to video 10 seconds, no starting picture, 50.000 points

The character block comes first, then four shots with their own seconds. The dialogue is written in the shot it belongs to.

[Character A: man, mid 40s, dark hair gray at the temples, three-day stubble, brown eyes, white shirt open at the collar, tie pulled loose, gold wedding band] Night, rain. A man parked in his own driveway who cannot make himself walk into his house. No music. Shot 1 (0-2.5s). Wide exterior, 35mm, locked frame. The car sits in the driveway, engine off. Rain runs in thick streaks down the windshield. One warm porch light burns on the house behind, smeared through wet glass. He is a still silhouette behind the wheel. Shot 2 (2.5-5s). Interior, three-quarter, 50mm, slow push-in. Both hands still grip the wheel though the engine is off, knuckles pale. Rain shadows crawl down his cheek. He exhales once through his nose and does not blink. Shot 3 (5-7.5s). Macro insert, 100mm, static. A folded letter on the passenger seat, one corner darkened by rain. His thumb presses the crease, then he pushes the letter into the glovebox and snaps it shut. [Character A, low hoarse whisper]: "It's fine. I'm fine." Shot 4 (7.5-10s). Reverse through the windshield from outside, 85mm, very slow push-in. He pulls a smile into place and holds it, eyes flat. The house door opens off-frame right and a wedge of warm light slides across his face. Lighting. Cold blue street ambient, one warm porch light behind. Audio. Rain on the car roof, the engine ticking as it cools, a distant dog, the metal click of the glovebox. Whispered line only, no music.

2

Take two, the morning after

Kling O3 Pro, image to video 10 seconds, starts from a held frame, 50.000 points

A frame of the man is kept and fed back in. The prompt opens by listing everything that must not change.

Preserve the man's face, white shirt and burgundy tie, the car and the parking lot exactly as in the image. He lifts the paper coffee cup, does not drink, sets it back down on the steering wheel. He glances at the dashboard clock, then looks at himself in the side mirror and straightens his tie, holding the look one beat too long. His jaw sets. Rain has stopped, water still beads on the roof. Very slow push-in through the side window, 50mm, otherwise locked frame. Flat overcast morning light, muted cold palette. No cuts, one continuous take.

3

Take three, the door

Kling O3 Pro, image to video 10 seconds, ends the film, 50.000 points

The letter comes back out and stays visible. He knocks, the light lands on him, and he does not smile.

Preserve the man's face, white shirt, burgundy tie, the porch and the door exactly as in the image. He lowers the raised hand without knocking, looks down at the unfolded letter in his other hand, and this time does not fold it. He takes one breath, lifts the letter chest high so it stays visible, and knocks twice. The door opens off-frame left and warm interior light spreads across his face and the paper. He does not smile. Very slow push-in, 85mm, otherwise locked frame. Warm porch key light, cold blue night behind. One continuous take, no cuts.

The rules behind it

Describe the character once, in a block at the top, then only refer back to them.
Give every shot its own seconds, lens and camera move. Ten unwritten seconds get filled by the engine.
Put dialogue inside the shot it belongs to, with the tone in brackets.
Open a continuing take with "preserve", then list the face, the clothes and the place.
Write the audio, down to the click of the glovebox. It changes how the picture is cut.

Your own ten second scene

The same setup, empty and waiting for your scene. Fill in the brackets, generate the still first, then run the clips one after another with the frame you liked as the start.

[Character A: age, hair, clothing, one detail that never changes] [Time of day, weather, and the one thing the scene is about]. No music. Shot 1 (0-2.5s). [Framing, lens, camera move]. [What happens]. Shot 2 (2.5-5s). [Framing, lens, camera move]. [What happens]. Shot 3 (5-7.5s). [Framing, lens, camera move]. [What happens]. [Character A, tone]: "[line]" Shot 4 (7.5-10s). [Framing, lens, camera move]. [What happens]. Lighting. [Key and ambient]. Audio. [Three real sounds]. No music.